By The Wiz
….unless, of course, you haven’t read the book, in which case you should skip this post entirely, because there will be spoilers. But I really, really, want to talk about it, so indulge me.
First, I want to say that I am a Fablehaven fan. I have been since the beginning, and I think each book is better than the last. My daughter and I fight over who gets to read it first (and I totally win, thank you very much). This last one is full of adventure, right from the start, and it’s a page turner - don’t pick it up unless you have some time to devote to it.
That being said, my one beef with Fablehaven the whole way through is the grandparents’ role, specifically the grandfather. He basically does NOTHING in all five books. Kendra and Seth (well, more Kendra than Seth) go to him for help, and all he does is call meetings and talk about trying to reach the Sphinx. It is Kendra and Seth that go and actually do stuff. The grandmother does a smidge, but once she’s negotiated with a troll in book one, all her help is done.
I understand this. It is a series for children, so making children the protagonists makes absolute, perfect sense, and I would be MORE angry if the kids just sat around and whined to their grandparents, who then stepped in and fixed it all. HOWEVER, these are not books where all the adults take a back seat. Warren, Tanu, Trask, Mara, and more - all of them go out with the Sorenson kids, they all participate in the adventures, and risk everything for the sake of the Knights of the Dawn. Why can’t Grandpa go somewhere and do something? He has to have some skillz, or else he wouldn’t be caretaker, or a Knight. (I mentioned this to my husband, who paused and said ”he makes pancakes.”)
At the end of book 4, Grandpa Sorenson is made the new Captain of the Knights of the Dawn - FINALLY! He’ll actually get to do something in book five! Nope. He spends all of the book sitting in prison, having been captured five seconds into his first mission. Patton Burgess runs things from his deathbed, from the past, when he’s close to 100. Patton is basically Indiana Jones without the whip - Grandpa can’t have any spunk?
Barring that minor quibble, I of course loved the book. The action begins right away, startingly so. I loved that Seth healed Graulas, only to have the whole thing backfire on him AND the Sphinx (although I thought the demon would have killed him on the spot, but of course that couldn’t happen or else there would be no story). I loved the writing on the wall in the cell (You’re in a Turkish prison! Seth rules!) - I loved that the only really predictable thing was that you were sure it would end well, solely because, well, it just HAD TO, but you weren’t sure HOW it would get there. I kept waiting for someone else to turn traitor, Warren specifically, and even though he didn’t, I loved that I was wondering.
What was with Seth carrying around Thronis’ figurines the whole time in his emergency kit, only to have them be complete nonentities? Hmmmm? I’m just mad because I thought they would figure prominently (like be the key to the last preserve) and every time they were mentioned, I thought “ok, here it comes” but…nope. Red herring. Curse you, Brandon Mull, for not making my theories plausible!!!
How fun was it that Kendra’s love interest used to be a demon prince who was really a dragon in human form and her next crush turned out to a fairy prince who is actually a unicorn in human form? She’s learning to pick better, people. Team unicorn!!
I would have liked to see Seth grow as a shadow charmer a bit more, he didn’t really acquire any new skillz even though many were mentioned. Maybe next book. Oh yeah. This is it. What a bummer. The author does say the characters might show up now and again in future endeavors, so maybe then Seth will be able to do majorly cool, Seth-like stunts. You know, that aren’t evil.
So there you go. I’ve now talked about it, and I feel much better. Two thumbs up. Have any of you read it yet? What did you think?




Never read it, but will have to pick it up now that I’ve read your post!
Comment #1 by KamiMarch 31st, 2010 at 12:41 pmI’m only 100 pages in. My kids have been fighting over who gets to read it so I only get it late nights. I’ll be back to chat soon though…
Comment #2 by Geoff JMarch 31st, 2010 at 2:58 pmMy husband points out that there were some pacing issues - the beginning and the end move really fast, and the middle seems to drag. (The mission to find all the eternals bored him a bit.) He also stands firm that they would have all been much better off sitting at home doing nothing - hmmm….are the artifacts safer sitting in this little attic, or protected by all these spells? But then, there would have been nothing to talk about the last five books.
Comment #3 by The WizMarch 31st, 2010 at 3:24 pmi liked the captain moroni action at the end when kendra fights the demon with the rousing thought of her friends, family, etc, and some good pushes for the new YW value when the unicorn likes “virtuous young women”! i thought it was a good conclusion, some fun action and surprises. and yes, i won the battle with my 3 kids too. it’s being read in age order, oldest to youngest (fastest to slowest)
Comment #4 by anitaMarch 31st, 2010 at 4:21 pmI didn’t get past Fablehaven One. I thought it was o.k., but not page-turning. We have two and three here in the house but I’ve never been able to muster up enough boredom to read them. (That said, my daughter LOVES the books. LOVES. So - you know - different folks, different strokes.)
Comment #5 by SueMarch 31st, 2010 at 5:20 pmSue - do you like other fantasy books, or do you find the whole genre boring?
Comment #6 by The WizMarch 31st, 2010 at 5:59 pmI didn’t read your post because we have a tradition of reading this series aloud together, and I can only read 2-3 chapters a day. So far, this is the best one yet (and it is really, really hard to not read ahead). I’ll have to check back and see what you have to say after I finish.
Comment #7 by latermomMarch 31st, 2010 at 6:10 pmI believe books two and three were my favorite, but I really enjoyed this one as well.
(Until he turned into a crazy dragon that is)
Comment #8 by Amateur StephMarch 31st, 2010 at 8:09 pmI agree that the Grandparents were actionless, but it was hard for me to imagine that they were spry enough to be fighting demons and wielding swords like the others. I wish they were a little more wise at least.
I had the exact thoughts about the tower and the leviathan statues! I was sure that they would be important.
I liked that the Sphinx was clearly deluded not just clearly evil. I felt a little weird about the whole ageless unicorn love interest. It felt too much like the Edward/Bella “Twilight” dynamic with the age difference. Oh well. It was a nice twist in 4 to have Gavin turn out to be the demon prince, but it made me a little sad. I almost liked Gavin more than Bracken
I’m with Sue. I read most of the first one, but never really got into it. Don’t know why. I love Harry Potter and Robin McKinley. My 12-year old LOVES these books but he loves ALL fantasy. He hasn’t read this one yet. This post would drive him nuts.
Comment #9 by FairchildApril 1st, 2010 at 7:47 amOk I finished the book yesterday. I was pleased with it. Mull really hit his stride with the final battle and I like how he consciously wraps up loose ends throughout the book. (Even down to details about the Knights paying for the rental cars they don’t return.)
In terms of criticisms I think the books tend to be a little too formulaic. Odd number chapters with Seth having a death defying adventure, even number chapters with Kendra having a death defying adventure. I thought Book 4 was the worst one for that sort of thing — moreso than Book 5.
I think the my biggest disappointment was how quickly things went South after the riveting final battle. It was weird to have that great scene end abruptly with the wizard Agad basically patting them on the head. It felt almost like a Scooby Doo ending to me: “We couldn’t have done it without you meddling kids”. Perhaps it is too much to hope for a Lord of the Rings quality of wind down where you continue to feel the gravity of the events. But the final battle had a faint hint of LOTR so I guess I was expecting a little more from the battle wind down.
But those minor gripes aside I thought the final battle really delivered. It really exceeded my expectations. Nicely done overall.
Comment #10 by Geoff JApril 4th, 2010 at 12:14 pmSue and Fairchild,
I thought the first book was the worst in the series. Book 2 is significantly better that Book 1. So that one may be worth trying. I personally liked Books 2, 3, and 5 best.
Comment #11 by Geoff JApril 4th, 2010 at 12:17 pmI would have to agree with all your points, Geoff. It did end a little abruptly, although I had a hard time with LOTR going on FOREVER after everything was done. So I guess I like somewhere in between. And Agad did kind of swoop in and take over, then take the artifacts to re-hide them, and everybody’s OK with it? I thought no one person should know all that.
I kind of hoped Seth and Kendra would have to wield the sword together - light and dark - kind of like they had to with the dragons. That would have been cool.
And Book 1 is definitely the weakest.
Comment #12 by The WizApril 4th, 2010 at 12:23 pmWhat I loved was when I was dropping hints about it on Facebook a few months ago and your brother Jim asked, “Is there tasteful nudity?” It was all I could do not to answer, “Well . . . yeah.”
Comment #13 by EmilyApril 6th, 2010 at 12:48 pmOkay, I can FINALLY read your post and comments because I finally finished the book. Unlike you, I lost the battle and dh got to read it first. Good thing he’s a fast reader. So I loved it. Loved the whole series, but this book especially. Like Geoff mentioned above, I couldn’t help but draw a lot of similarities with LOTR, especially the comic reliefs Newel and Doren (a.k.a. Merry and Pippin).
I agree with your points, Wiz, and thought the grandparents should have somehow been released to help fight in the final battle instead of staying locked up inside the entire time. It would’ve been nice if the Sphinx could have gotten them out and earned a few more points. And what’s up with the cop-out of not telling us Seth’s last promise to the Singing Sisters? It’s like Mull ran out of ideas of things to have Seth do that would pay them back but not be too much to give.
And I hoped that Kendra would finally hook up with somebody, but I thought it might finally be Warren. I didn’t see him hooking up with Vanessa at all. I liked Kendra and Bracken together, though, and just wish they would’ve finally kissed at the end, but after all this is Brandon Mull not Stephenie Meyer. Thanks for giving me a chance to reflect on the series; it was a great one.
Comment #14 by StarababaApril 7th, 2010 at 11:13 pmI agree with a lot of the comments everyone has made. The pacing of the book was a little off, but I still enjoyed it. I loved the Kendra/Bracken romance. I thought they were really cute together, but I do wish there were some kissing or something!! I hoped for a Kendra/Warren romance for a while until I remembered that they are 2nd cousins. Gross!
My biggest beef with the series is stupid Seth. Time and again he jumps in and does something stupid that everyone else has to clean up. I really couldn’t believe that Brandon Mull made Seth screw up AGAIN and in such a big way. That being said, I thought the demons taking over the opening of Zzyzx and the Sphynx helping out the Knights was pretty creative and unexpected.
If you tried the first book and didn’t like it, give the series another try. The first book was basically setting the stage for the underlying story, so it isn’t very similar to the other four. I wholeheartedly loved the series.
Comment #15 by ktmabeyMay 1st, 2011 at 11:28 pm